I'm a little turned off by this one
I think it would haver been excellent, but you went a little heavy on that pulsing, screaming sound. It started to sound like you had a good synth going, but turned it up loud enough to make it uncomfortable to listen to, and then just faded it in and out sharply. The result sounded absolutely broken to me, and was slightly disorienting because i'm wearing headphones. Thats unfortunate, because it sounded like it could have been a god melody.
I liked the piano break around 1:15, but the song broke into some crappy dubstep-style mix around 1:45. Sorry, I have no toleration for dubstep.
Sorry, mate. I'm largely an immense fan of your work, but this one just isn't so high on my list, so i'll have to pass it over. I don't do a whole lot of reviewing, but you're one of my favourite artists, so I decided to explain myself.
I look forward to more great music.
--FoxtrotZero