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Epic.

Unfortunately, I can't even hear the damned left channel. I have a pair of radioshack earbuds, and the left one completely self destructed - I mean, the cover came off and the internal parts of the speaker started coming loose.

Either way, merely more motivation to have my good headphones repaired, at which point in time I should be able to listen to this song in its full quality. I do like the melody, as I do like several of basshunter's melodys, though I don't recognize it. That having been said, as far as I am concerned, its original.

I love a good dance song. I'd say this one is on the border of being called rave.

Looking forward to more epic;
--FoxtrotZero

Never heard a Piano like this

Which is absolutely absurd. I'm a massive fan of pianos, and I think they're great in these types of songs. You usually have to TRY to not use a piano right for it to not make an impression, granted that you know what you're doing.

But. alas, its still a rarity, and for that reason and happening of chance, i've just never heard a piano used like this in a song like this, and i just hope there were more (mainly because it makes me feel like i wrote two paragraphs of insignificant).

Either way, the melody is good, its clearly a sort of 'blissful' song, as judged by the lack of real 'activity' and a sorta low tempo.

I really like the instruments *cough*piano*cough* or, more accurately, synths.

I could go on and on, but later if not sooner or already, I digress.

Looking forward to more work from you;
--Fox

Okay, If it's not already obvious

You struck bloody gold, man. You made 42 seconds of awesome, and the portal wants more of it.

I'd suggest you give it what you want, an angry portal isn't fun to deal with *wink*

And, nice work, BTW, love the buildup and the simple melody with the proper depth to it all.

I Would have done the Scales differently

Which is why i'm bugging out, because every time it goes through them, its not what I expect.

Good work.

Clear and Crisp

I'm not going to say thats a quality I look for, because I don't look for anything in particular. What I will tell you is that when people try to pull off a Simple, Clear melody like this, more often than not have I seen it fail.

Regardless of what I have seen, what you have here is pretty good, and the only place I see a failure is in its simplicity, but at least its not too long, so you manage to keep it from being repetative.

I really love the Piano/Techno mix, thats something i've always loved.

--Fox

Epic

There really is no other word for it.

I love the tune, I love the outlook, I love the mix.

I just wish it were longer and a slight bit less repetative.

Bad Song

Good Remix, though.

I like the dark theme you brewed into it, and i'm almost sad that there was no rearranging or slight slicemixing of the lyrics.

The fact that you just took the song and tinted it, no matter how epic, doesn't stand to reason. Particularly if you want to call it a Dance song, it would sound good if you did something to the lyrics.

I also reccomend removing the "deep" section from 2:34 to 2:51, which I only mention because i thought it had a poor taste to it.

I'd also reccomend some sort of an instrumental stretch. Seeing as how you seem to still be working on this, my criticism is aimed at this song in particular and not future projects.

Still, good work.
--Fox

b0b3rt responds:

I'll keep it in mind.
Generally I'm a purist when it comes to vocals (though honestly it's just an excuse for being terrible at slicing).

GarageBand

Nice try, but the music has no melody. Its simply horrifying noise. And its also made with premade loops.

RaptorJesus responds:

Fair enough but there's 2 "electronic beat" garageband loops in the background, the rest is anything BUT premade. Make sure you know what you're talking about next time.

DEAR GAWD, YOU ACHIEVED IT.

I hope you are fuxing happy about the millions of people who have now lost their sanity.

By the way, you know listening to this over and over can screw with your heartbeat?

What. The. Fuck.

Something is very wrong here.

To begin with. You have a crappy drum beat randomly laid out to a guy saying
"Ask me about my Weiner!"

Then you fucked around with it. And it remains crappy quality.
You're also obviously immaturely obsessed with the word "weiner." Grow the fuck up.

Screw constructive criticism, there is really not a damn thing that will save this piece of crap.

I hath spoken the truth.
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James Tyler Fox @Foxtrot-Zero

Age 28, Male

Student

Mira Mesa High

California

Joined on 4/13/08

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