Infiltration = Heavy Metal?
I don't think so, and i'd say thats where you wen't wrong...
Its well made, and everything is great except the sounds.
You kind of threw a dark theme on there, which is good, but there is like a heavy metal electric guitar, which is rather bad for the theme.
Some lighter things on there might add. Its not repetitive, just kinda bland, i think.
And a beat. Theres kind of a lack of beat. You have the guitar, and you have a good lead synth that kind of fluxes around.
Maybe tie down the synth. I think letting it wave around so much for the theme isn't too good, and a synth plus an electric guitar don't work together here.
I'm not sure what i am saying, but those are my feelings. I leave it to you to interpret them. I think you might want to redo the song with the same theme, but a new mentality on how it should be done.
I did like some of the metal parts. For some reason it reminds me of Red Faction...
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