Well...
You are right. It is a rigged system, and i'm not sure what it is based on, but it needs fixing. It needs to be based on a system that i am not finished. But it should be.
Anyway, feels like, i don't know, seizure music. Its okay. But the prominent synth is either on or off, constantly switching, and it is giving my ears a seizure. I like that it loops, though. The synths arent bad, but mixed together they arent too good. at least not like this.
The voice is good, but the vocals are kind of whacked. seriously. But worshiping music, thats a religion i could warm up to. : P
lets see, the background wasn't too bad. I liked in, but once again, more in and out. another audio seizure. seriously.
So all combined, it is not too bad...
But i have heard better, and you should try again.
keep it up...